WHAT A DAY!!!
I was shivering. My legs were shaking and it looked like I was doing the Cook Island dance. I was scared that all their big guys might squash me and turn me into a pancake.
While we were jogging onto the field I was starting to feel good about having to play our game and feeling confident. When Dominiq kicked the ball we all started charging it like we were a pack of angry, steaming bulls. When the first person ran it up straight it was a big guy and he had long hair. He got tackled by one of our team Sione. As all the fowards jumped into the ruck we stripped the ball and we gave it to the backs. As they ran they were stepping, defending, sprinting then they tripped up and people said “ohhh no”!
When the whistle blew it was half time and we had scored no try. Our coach Burt was angry at us because they were wining and we had nil.
So what was the final score? You got me hooked and now I want to know more :). This is a great piece of writing Nezinli. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMrs Burt
PS. Thank you for generously lending your jacket to a year 6 kid for the trip to Wellington. Please come and see me as I brought a small thank you back from Wellington!
Heyy Nezinli,
ReplyDeleteI really like your writting. I wish that yu could write more. As what Mr Burt said What was the final score? I really want to know Biut overall keep up the good work.
Victoria (Sis)