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Friday, August 3, 2012

Unexpected Birthday

I can’t believe it, but I have forgotten my very own birthday!  How wrong is this?  Sad but true, and this is how it all played out.

Waking  up, I thought today was just going to be another ordinary day , but...NO WAY!  Unexpectedly, my mum shouted, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY SON!!!”  I stood where I was, completely confused and wondered aloud, “What in the world are you talking about?” “Ahhh ,it is MY birthday,” I said as I smacked myself on the side of the head.

When I finally got up, I was as hungry as a grizzly bear  that had missed out on its’ dinner.  It felt like I was going to starve to death, but fortunately, there was some outstanding news that would save me.  I rushed to the shower,  got dressed, and set out to annoy my mum by asking her  repeatedly, “Can we go now?”   She eventually agreed, and we hopped in the car .  We were on our way.

I saw something in the distance and wondered what it was.  As we got closer ,I saw the sign more clearly,“Happy Days!” It is a restaurant, and my growling stomach is more than a little excited. Closer, closer, almost there now. I opened the door and there it was, my best friend.  I grabbed  a plate and walked over  to the buffet to say hello.   Good to see you Butter Chicken!  Where have you been Hot Crispy Chips?

I love my friends!

6 comments:

  1. I'd like to meet your friends, Nezinli. The way that you've written about them I think I might enjoy their company too. Perhaps you'd like to meet my friend Spare Ribs sometime.

    Mr J (short)

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  2. Room 4 Olympians in training!!!August 3, 2012 at 12:06 PM

    Kia ora Nez - Its your friends in Room 4 here. We have just read your fabulous story! We laughed and laughed and imagined you saying "Hi" to the butter chicken and the crispy golden chips!! Congratulations on such an amazing story. Because you used such descriptive language we ALL got a picture in our heads as we were reading what you had to say. Arohanui, Room 4.

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  3. Thank you Mr J and I'll love to meet your friends one day!

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    1. Than you room 4. you guys can visit my friend any time use want!

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  4. Nezinli, your writing didn't just hook me - it reeled me in, hook, line and sinker! Writing like this takes considerable creative energy and recrafting and judging by my reaction and the other comments you received it was well worth it.

    Thanks so much for brightening my day. Keep them coming like this

    Mrs Burt

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    1. Thanks a lot Mrs Burt it means a lot coming from you.

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